Topic: all I ever wanted
just_mary's photo
Mon 10/29/07 07:29 PM
All I ever wanted

Was your attention

To make you proud

To see the light in your eyes

But you seemed haunted

What was the distraction

Was I too loud

All I heard was loud sighs

I was undaunted

Seeking perfection

Like a pristine cloud

Oh how I made futile tries

I continually hunted

For your affection

Always unfound

Not ever finding me in your eyes


MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 10/29/07 07:31 PM
That's beautiful.

Nursingstudentjenn's photo
Mon 10/29/07 07:35 PM
That is nice and it hits close to home when u've been there...