Topic: Why
Jerrylee1970's photo
Sat 10/27/07 06:52 AM
You promised to love me forever
but forever was too long

When you said it was over
My life felt so wrong

Were we too young
I thought you was my wife
I did all I could
To make you my life

You say you love me but not in love anymore
You say you love me but push me out the door

Should I go or sould i fight
or should I let our love fade like a summers afternoon into the night.

Not really good but how i felt

Nickinolosers's photo
Sat 10/27/07 07:01 AM
It's lovely flowerforyou

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Sat 10/27/07 07:09 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

That was lovely!

geo54's photo
Sat 10/27/07 07:23 AM
nicedrinker

Raineegirl's photo
Sat 10/27/07 07:44 AM
I felt it too Jerrylee ... and I think thats what its all about .... good luck to you.

Jerrylee1970's photo
Sat 10/27/07 07:57 AM
Still trying to write how i feel and the more i try the angrier i get cause it will not flow. It looks more like a madmans random thoughts

uniquewithin's photo
Sun 10/28/07 05:56 PM
Very nice, and it looks more like a man who is trying to figure out what to do next....not a madman from what I have seen..:smile:

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Sun 10/28/07 06:00 PM
You hit that one dead ondrinker