Topic: WATERBIRD
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Tue 02/09/16 11:21 AM
I forget your eyes and their likeness to the sea.....
The water so soft and subtle,
when laid upon me.

Can't really recall the air against my lips no more.
Unfresh now....just cold.

No life, just dry and still-
As rock. Just wave upon wave,
washing away debris of our lot.
The sun and the moon - only light that we've got now....
To claw back happiness from nothing - somehow.

Don't love like I used to.
Can't feel new waters the way I felt you.
Time means nothing without Truth.
And my Truth is You.
My Truth is Love......
The 1 and my everything that I can't let go of.
For what would be the point?
There is no greener grass and no other fish.
No silver lining around the *** of a new dish.
No other smile to catch my eyes.
No other bed upon which I wanna lie.
It's a question of time.
as I gaze at the tide now.
Yes- Sun always shines
Somehow....

phoenix077's photo
Tue 02/09/16 01:22 PM
Wow,
I love that poem. Such eloquence.
I assume it is your work?
Congratulations if so. You are a gifted writer.
Well done.

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Tue 02/09/16 01:39 PM
Thankyou. Yes it is my own work. I've not been writing for long. Just really enjoy it.

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Sun 02/14/16 07:03 AM
Mandz just keep writing..never miss the opportunity for a scribble and doodle! Well - chosen title, I think you're spot on when it comes to writing about the connection between loss of human connection, circumstances and how we relate to the world after loss.

Violinmaestro71's photo
Sun 02/14/16 07:04 AM
Mandz just keep writing..never miss the opportunity for a scribble and doodle! Well - chosen title, I think you're spot on when it comes to writing about the connection between loss of human connection, circumstances and how we relate to the world after loss.

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Sun 02/14/16 09:44 AM
Thanks Maestro. Tbh - I just write what I feel. :wink: