as i close my eyes,
and start to visualize my thoughts,
only one thing comes to mind.
the vision of you smiling and dancing.
as i sit and watch,
you get closer and closer.
your arms wrap around my neck,
like a snake trying to choke me to death.
as your face gets closer to mine,
i see the flaming evil look of the devil eyes.
with that thought in mind,
i start to think.
it wasn't me that was hurting you.
it was you that ****ed everything up.
but as i open my eyes,
i noticed how pure imagination,
can bring out the truth behide closed doors.

Whoa...what a sudden stop. Sounding romantic at first and then bamm. Nice read though except that one word. I use the word muck in the place of that word.

Very powerful words and imagery. I liked it.

cool

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