Topic: Essence of the Night Before (A little risque) | |
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Here is one I wrote last night at work. The words were coming to me while driving to work, but I couldn't stop and write those few words down, so I recorded them on my cell phone...well here is the whole thing and I hope you enjoy it...
Essence of the Night Before I'm standing on the front porch of my cabin, Drinking a cup of coffee, taking in the morning dew, The aftermath of the the night before, With warmth in my heart and soul, Lingering thoughts of you. How our bodies were entangled with passion, Tussling to and fro, with no lust, But love amongst the sheets, Lovemaking so intense, passionate kisses, Caressing every inch, breathing so heavy, I go down in defeat. My heart pounding, you resting in my arms, Lingering soft kisses, gentle caresses, We were nearly peaked out, A touch here and a touch there, The heat builds once again, The night lasted throughout. Listening to the loons on the lake, my cup needs refilled, I snuff my cigarette out on the floor, You have filled my heart with love, My soul still yearns inside To have you once more. |
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Nice one wolf
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Thanks...I got inspired with that one, by thinking of my dream, of one day owning a cabin by a lake and being able to write my bestseller.
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Great poem! My dream is to own a log home by the lake planning on doing that by next summer
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mmmmmmm
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good 1 wolf , nut u should not crush your cig. on the floor
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I own a Saw Mill how bout we get together and make that dream come true...
log cabins are nice on the lake, But more beautiful along a waterway with a nice mountain view. I can see for about 10miles on cloudy days and about 40 on clear days... I find inspiration also at a drop of time. |
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nice sweetie oops did i say that
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nice sweetie oops did i say that
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((((( wolf )))))
I love this,,,,, So beautiful,,,, |
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it's getting hot in here...
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Thanks Xena...my dream come true also.
Thanks Eric for the wonderful..may take you up on it one day. Thanks coco..and you can call me sweetie or whatever you want. I don't mind. Thanks Mom...glad you liked it. Thanks to my collaborator blonde, also glad you enjoyed it. Get some ice Jelly...it'll cool you down. It's a shame you can't post erotica, you'd be in melt down if so. |
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Oops forgot bgeorge...glad you liked it too.
And dc...at least it was outside on the porch, not inside of the cabin. Glad you liked it also. |
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Yet another masterpiece my friend
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Thanks Ob...with friends like I have made on here in this site, it has brought inspiration back to me to write once again. I can almost feel the words beaming to come out. Thanks to all once again.
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no erotica??? well dang....
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Really awesome poem, carries the imagination with beautiful imagery
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Thank you Crimson....that's what I try to do with all my poetry so you can visualize and put your imagination to work.
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you're welcome wolfeyes, it's always great to able to see great work, keep it up!
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