Topic: the stars at night
brian1066's photo
Wed 11/11/15 02:33 AM
The stàrs at night shine so bright
Far away yet in sight
One by won the twinkle ther
Thay grace the heavens oh what a sight

Let your mind wander all trubles depart
Stair into the heavens open your heart
Walk with your lover in star light
Look at ther beauty and twingling grace
Turn to your lover look at his face
Bath in stare light and you will see
Oh how the trubles are solved and you are free

jarviep's photo
Wed 11/11/15 04:07 AM
Very nice. You have a few small typo's that do change meaning though just thought you may like to know. I appreciate the meaning and feeling here.

no photo
Wed 11/11/15 04:59 AM
drinker drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

brian1066's photo
Sun 12/27/15 08:31 AM
If the feeling i bear you to do shar then i thing it just right that we shoud wright .
The next moved yours and in vers ill say
Stay well my proncess intill another day

temmy1761's photo
Sun 01/03/16 01:13 AM
This is lovely