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Topic: Storms.
EquatorialDaSh Joined Tue 11/03/15 Posts: 20	Mon 11/09/15 02:38 PM
Beneath the starless mirror, a seething grey, as though of a ferocious nature. Faint clouds gather hither yet the mocking tranquil persists, as of a patient death God. Beneath the evergrey mirror, a seething storm, thinly veiled, hiding yet the truth within. A truth, Beautiful and Dangerous, thus hidden by the thrice beasts of the psyche. A split between Earth and Sky, yet a bridge between, the children of Air. Perhaps the time is getting to me...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 11/09/15 05:42 PM


jarviep Joined Sun 11/08/15 Posts: 1447	Mon 11/09/15 08:30 PM
Nice

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EquatorialDaSh Joined Tue 11/03/15 Posts: 20	Tue 11/10/15 11:32 AM
Thank you, for your comments

Maxisu Joined Wed 07/16/14 Posts: 1212	Tue 11/10/15 01:00 PM
Beneath the starless mirror, a seething grey, as though of a ferocious nature. Faint clouds gather hither yet the mocking tranquil persists, as of a patient death God. Beneath the evergrey mirror, a seething storm, thinly veiled, hiding yet the truth within. A truth, Beautiful and Dangerous, thus hidden by the thrice beasts of the psyche. A split between Earth and Sky, yet a bridge between, the children of Air. Perhaps the time is getting to me... kind of made me think of a N. Shimalayans movie atmosphere..

thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Tue 11/10/15 01:04 PM


EquatorialDaSh Joined Tue 11/03/15 Posts: 20	Sat 11/28/15 03:06 AM
Thank you .

Dreadaye Joined Fri 03/29/13 Posts: 687	Sat 11/28/15 09:40 AM
Nice work

bolarinwa001 Joined Sun 02/01/15 Posts: 11	Mon 11/30/15 10:46 AM
Cool

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Mon 11/30/15 02:34 PM
Great write! Thanks for sharing!

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