Topic: Teddybears demise
poeticflight's photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:52 PM
As far as we remember
Our TeddyBear's been our friend.
With hugs it holds our warmth inside
To ease our pain within.

It never wants to argue
Or even criticize
Trust will never disappear
For it never tells you lies.

As the days turn into years
Into the world we slide.
We search for love and passion
As teddy is set aside.

We meet our one and only
Our forever in a dream.
The flames burn deep within our soul
But nothing is as it would seem.

Along comes lifes confusion
Smoldering embers will remain
As tears the fire extinguish
And love turns into pain.

We wish life were that teddybear
Through all the tears we cried.
Then love could last forever
And loneliness would subside.

no photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:54 PM
Whoa..that was soo awesome!!

poeticflight's photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:55 PM
thank you

no photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:55 PM
Very nice poetic...welcome.flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:57 PM
that was quite lovely poetic..i still hug my teddy bear when I am lonelyflowerforyou flowerforyou

poeticflight's photo
Thu 10/18/07 03:58 PM
thank you all ... I am glad you enjoyed the poem

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 10/18/07 06:37 PM
:cry:


Joking.... laugh



Nice poem! flowerforyou