Topic: Plz rate me
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Thu 10/15/15 06:26 PM
Be honest looking for a Relationship with a girl 18-23

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Thu 10/15/15 06:41 PM
I think it well written, but who knows what do girls want. Good luck.

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Thu 10/15/15 06:47 PM
Maybe a photo where you're not looking so grim? The written section needs a lot of work. It has a sincere feel to it, but I don't think most 18 year old girls are really going to care about looks fading. It seems as though you want something serious which is fine, but your "tone" doesn't have to be quite as serious.

Maybe try to lighten up a bit? Everyone likes a sense of humor...