Topic: this poem is for whalemstr
Queene123's photo
Tue 09/29/15 10:45 PM
you dream upon
a dream
and the shattering
screams
where you tend to open
that door for
new found hope
as not searching
for a new partner
is not a crime
for opening your heart
of your own and bringing
in that dark shadow
to make it look
more alive
as rebuilding
your youth
once again
as being alone and raising
your family is what shall be
as your children are your life
and ment to be

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Fri 10/16/15 05:21 PM
flowerforyou

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Fri 10/16/15 06:50 PM
I thought your writing was thoughtful.
How can so few words reach the senses, but a million words never could.
Each line contains only two or three words, yet they are like whole sentences.
You are clever, very very clever, thank you.

whalemstr's photo
Sat 10/17/15 07:30 AM
Wow!
Thank you...