Topic: FORLORN aka DEPTHS
ZenSoul79's photo
Sat 09/19/15 11:36 PM
POEM FOR THE FORLORN (original piece)
Had you inquired, you would have known.
Had you known, you would've stayed.
Had you stayed you would've witnessed my depth.
Had you witnessed my depth, you would've delved deeper for more.
But you would never find a bottom, for my soul is infinite.
And yet.....the opportunity lies for my soul to be explored by you.
Because if you only scratch the surface, you will never be sure of how deep this soul can go.
So do you float above, with the others?
Or do you plumb my soul's depths and witness it's wonders?

Ladywind7's photo
Sun 09/20/15 12:12 AM
Nice writing.
Floaters, latherers miss out then :)

ZenSoul79's photo
Mon 09/21/15 07:25 AM

Nice writing.
Floaters, latherers miss out then :)



True. But I have faith that sometimes those rare, few people with a sense of curiosity and adventure will throw aside their inhibition and dive.
And dive.
And dive.
And personally, I love that they have that, because I'm the same.
If the vibe is compatible enough with a certain lady, the possibilities are literally endless.
It takes time, though, and a certain amount of patience to build that.
These days...I'm kind of recognizing that more and more, and I want to spend time not obsessing about other people, and focusing more on myself and becoming the type of person that is able to entice, ensnare, build my own "mystique" if you will...and maybe it'll leave them wanting more.
Or maybe it wont.
Risk is part of all things. Especially matters of the heart.
:smile:

SitkaRains's photo
Mon 09/21/15 07:35 AM
Beautiful work..
I have to agree We all have to take risks
Life is a risk

ZenSoul79's photo
Mon 09/21/15 09:38 PM
Hey you! happy

groucho2's photo
Tue 09/22/15 10:53 AM
Agree!

ZenSoul79's photo
Tue 09/22/15 09:56 PM
Thanks for the kind words everyone.

Ladywind7's photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:52 AM


Nice writing.
Floaters, latherers miss out then :)



True. But I have faith that sometimes those rare, few people with a sense of curiosity and adventure will throw aside their inhibition and dive.
And dive.
And dive.
And personally, I love that they have that, because I'm the same.
If the vibe is compatible enough with a certain lady, the possibilities are literally endless.
It takes time, though, and a certain amount of patience to build that.
These days...I'm kind of recognizing that more and more, and I want to spend time not obsessing about other people, and focusing more on myself and becoming the type of person that is able to entice, ensnare, build my own "mystique" if you will...and maybe it'll leave them wanting more.
Or maybe it wont.
Risk is part of all things. Especially matters of the heart.
:smile:



I like what you wrote here. Be your own man. Obsessing over floaters is a waste of effort. Be careful who you give permission to dive into you.
flowerforyou

ZenSoul79's photo
Wed 09/23/15 07:50 PM



Nice writing.
Floaters, latherers miss out then :)



True. But I have faith that sometimes those rare, few people with a sense of curiosity and adventure will throw aside their inhibition and dive.
And dive.
And dive.
And personally, I love that they have that, because I'm the same.
If the vibe is compatible enough with a certain lady, the possibilities are literally endless.
It takes time, though, and a certain amount of patience to build that.
These days...I'm kind of recognizing that more and more, and I want to spend time not obsessing about other people, and focusing more on myself and becoming the type of person that is able to entice, ensnare, build my own "mystique" if you will...and maybe it'll leave them wanting more.
Or maybe it wont.
Risk is part of all things. Especially matters of the heart.
:smile:



I like what you wrote here. Be your own man. Obsessing over floaters is a waste of effort. Be careful who you give permission to dive into you.
flowerforyou


Exactly. glasses