Topic: Daydream Believer
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Mon 09/07/15 04:12 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Mon 09/07/15 05:08 PM
Yes, I look forward to more wonder together,
But I do so without sense of entitlement that it will be.so.
For the detail you've contained,
Like a dream scene from another realm,
could not have been expected,.

So do have a restful night.
And maybe you will feel my presence,
right there
like a butterfly
resting
gently
on the back of your hand
waiting for your first awakened breath
to set me on my journey again....

But till I feel that puff of air,
three i shall stay,
in contact with you.
Sheltering from the rain
Watching over Love.

flowerforyou

SitkaRains's photo
Mon 09/07/15 04:23 PM
Absolutely breath takingly beautiful
The beauty of a fragility and strength of
the butterfly.
Oh how so magical it can be.

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 09/07/15 10:41 PM
:smile:

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Tue 09/08/15 01:38 AM
:heart:

tommyboy1101's photo
Tue 09/08/15 05:20 AM
Dread, my friend,

I agree with all positive input thus - here in the forum. You're writing is deep and this piece especially worthy. Very nicely tossed t'gether, Dread ol' friend.

I get good wholesome feelings from this artistic piece, and, it is my hope you'll continue on with your work here until, say, somewhere beyond the twelfth of never. ( And as we both know - that's a long long time. )

tommy boy moran / Ireland

tulip2633's photo
Wed 09/09/15 10:25 PM
That is wonderful! It makes me think of "Flight of the Bumblebee."

Bravo!!!

flowerforyou