Like the title says I guess..."Is my profile written well enough? Would you date me?"

Man you have wrote a novel :D.
Complete profile, but it's wrong thinking that your words will be enough for dating, there are lots of things you need to do, to start a conversation and to let woman to decide :)

Btw good luck in your search. :)

To be realy honest with you I read your entire profile most people won't though... I think it is good and yet there is too much there.
A profile is an advertisement of who you are and what you are looking for. It isn't meant to be a complete bio of said person.


I can see the effort you have put into it and I feel like a louse just saying that to you. I don't want you to be discouraged in the least since I think you have a lot to offer.

As John stated a profile won't get you a date what it will get you is a second look. The spark of conversation is what is going to get the date for you.

I honestly wish you the best and I whole heartedly welcome you to Mingles



I can't believe I just asked someone to streamline their profile,

are you basing the dates on how well your profile is written? let me know how that works out for ya...

Sorry Honey you are too young for me

Welcome to mingle
Good luck with your search.

hi
welcome to mingle.
I read your profile and it's a bit if reading. but then again, I enjoy reading.
I suppose that's your way of weeding out who might not be interested.
your profile shows possibility, though getting to know the real person takes time and interaction.
join the forums and get to know people.

good luck on your search

wow!
i agree with Sitkarains, your profile is far too long.
anyone who is having a quick look at potential matches will skip yours straight away as they probably haven't got the time, or inclination to spen 10 minutes reading it all

but..it's great that you have taken the time and effort to do all that and hopefully, we will be proved wrong and your effort will be rewarded

good luck sir