Topic: Just Once
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Sun 06/07/15 04:55 AM
Edited by technovative on Sun 06/07/15 04:56 AM
Please! I beg of the cosmos.

Let my broken spirit mend,
In the bracing arms of she.

Let the plummet of my heart,
Be arrested in the cradle of her bosom.

Let my numb skin be revived,
By the electricity of her touch.

Let my gasping lungs be resuscitated,
By the sweetness of her breath.

Let my trembling lips be soothed,
By the caress of her kiss.

Let my raging passion mate,
With the fire of her loins.

Oh how I pray that my desperate plea,
Isn't yet again absorbed,
By the deafening silence of the solitary life,
That has served me but now plagues me.

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Sun 06/07/15 04:59 AM
i feel you...i really do..

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Sun 06/07/15 05:01 AM
Powerful

Thanks for sharing Techno

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Sun 06/07/15 05:47 AM
Beautiful write.

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Sun 06/07/15 07:04 AM

Please! I beg of the cosmos.

Let my broken spirit mend,
In the bracing arms of she.

Let the plummet of my heart,
Be arrested in the cradle of her bosom.

Let my numb skin be revived,
By the electricity of her touch.

Let my gasping lungs be resuscitated,
By the sweetness of her breath.

Let my trembling lips be soothed,
By the caress of her kiss.

Let my raging passion mate,
With the fire of her loins.

Oh how I pray that my desperate plea,
Isn't yet again absorbed,
By the deafening silence of the solitary life,
That has served me but now plagues me.



Hot as a firecracker, deep as an oceanlove ...(((((((Techno)))))))

PacificStar48's photo
Sun 06/07/15 03:14 PM
Ooooooh that is sooooooh good. Just knocks me out the talent I find hidden here!!!Bravo!

technovative's photo
Mon 06/08/15 07:15 PM
Thanks for your attention and thoughts folks.
(((Leigh)))

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Mon 06/08/15 07:21 PM

Thanks for your attention and thoughts folks.
(((Leigh)))


(((((Techno)))))flowerforyou

PacificStar48's photo
Mon 06/08/15 09:44 PM
Have you ever thought about trying any of the awards, scholarships, and or prizes they list in Poets& Writer's magazine at PW.ORG?
The subscription is around $30 but your local community college library probably has it for reading. I think your stuff is prize worthy. Pretty cool when you can make a passion also a vocation. Maybe it already is ?

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Tue 06/09/15 07:06 PM
PacificStar48, thank you for your generous compliment. Thus far I've been writing as an outlet, not a vocation. I wasn't aware of the Poets & Writers organization, thank you for bringing it to my attention. I visited their website, it looks like a great resource of information and community. I may submit some of my poems for contest, or publishing consideration.

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Tue 06/09/15 07:12 PM
Wow Techno! that is really deep and I can certainly relate to your poem!! Thank you!

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Wed 06/10/15 08:44 AM
I :heart: it. flowerforyou

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Sun 06/14/15 12:34 AM
love, love, love this poem..happy

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Sun 06/14/15 04:25 AM
I :heart: it. flowerforyou


Thank you (((Debbie)))flowerforyou

love, love, love this poem..happy


Thanks JaUkNz.