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Topic: Missed Oppurtunity
ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Thu 05/21/15 09:14 PM
When I try, you ignore. when I give, I don't get back. when I put myself in your vicinity, you do not take notice. well....I'm done trying. In a world of a billion or so willing women, I picked you. You were preoccupied. And it's too late now. Last call. Closing up shop and moving on. So when you see that girl on my arm with the killer smile, wonderful attentive personality, who happens to give me all the attention I desire because she took notice when you didn't...well, I wish i could say it was nice knowing you. But you never gave me the chance. She did. Good luck and goodbye, Lost One.

SuzQ66 Joined Thu 03/26/15 Posts: 1969	Thu 05/21/15 09:24 PM
Your poetry is beautiful, and I admire your decision!

D40nine Joined Tue 01/24/12 Posts: 99	Thu 05/21/15 09:41 PM
I can relate to that, bro. nice one...

SitkaRains Joined Thu 10/09/08 Posts: 17228	Thu 05/21/15 10:26 PM
wonderfully written.. Thank you for sharing...

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Fri 05/22/15 04:37 AM
Thank you all!

IamwhoIam1 Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 6400	Fri 05/22/15 05:11 AM
I like vanilla. GL.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 05/22/15 06:03 AM
When I try, you ignore. when I give, I don't get back. when I put myself in your vicinity, you do not take notice. well....I'm done trying. In a world of a billion or so willing women, I picked you. You were preoccupied. And it's too late now. Last call. Closing up shop and moving on. So when you see that girl on my arm with the killer smile, wonderful attentive personality, who happens to give me all the attention I desire because she took notice when you didn't...well, I wish i could say it was nice knowing you. But you never gave me the chance. She did. Good luck and goodbye, Lost One. Classy...

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 05/22/15 12:54 PM
Very much loved it.

JustScribbles Joined Thu 04/02/15 Posts: 1091	Fri 05/22/15 02:30 PM
Good stuff, partner.

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Fri 05/22/15 09:24 PM
I like vanilla. GL. DAFUQ?

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Fri 05/22/15 09:25 PM
When I try, you ignore. when I give, I don't get back. when I put myself in your vicinity, you do not take notice. well....I'm done trying. In a world of a billion or so willing women, I picked you. You were preoccupied. And it's too late now. Last call. Closing up shop and moving on. So when you see that girl on my arm with the killer smile, wonderful attentive personality, who happens to give me all the attention I desire because she took notice when you didn't...well, I wish i could say it was nice knowing you. But you never gave me the chance. She did. Good luck and goodbye, Lost One. Classy... Thanks!

IamwhoIam1 Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 6400	Sat 05/23/15 12:59 AM
I like vanilla. GL. DAFUQ? As in not into swirl. Thanks for the inbox. Who is this poem for?

JustScribbles Joined Thu 04/02/15 Posts: 1091	Sat 05/23/15 01:02 AM
As in not into swirl. Thanks for the inbox. Who is this poem for? I know who I'd send it to. Does that count?

IamwhoIam1 Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 6400	Sat 05/23/15 01:05 AM
I may have broken yet another heart.

JustScribbles Joined Thu 04/02/15 Posts: 1091	Sat 05/23/15 01:08 AM
I may have broken yet another heart. Silly girl.

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Sat 05/23/15 05:39 AM
I like vanilla. GL. DAFUQ? As in not into swirl. Thanks for the inbox. Who is this poem for? White men only, huh? So you discriminate based on skin color and what else?

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Sat 05/23/15 05:42 AM
I may have broken yet another heart. So discriminatory by skin color AND presumptuous? Good luck with your dating experience on here. I think you're really limiting yourself but good luck anyway, at least you know what you want.

IamwhoIam1 Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 6400	Sat 05/23/15 06:55 AM
Don't write poems because you misunderstand. I like vanilla. It's what I find attractive and exciting. It's called a preference, not discrimination.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 05/23/15 01:49 PM
Perfect read...I missed an opportunity too:(((( I can relate...and wish all the happiness in the world...to him. Thanks for sharing.

ZenSoul79 Joined Thu 01/15/15 Posts: 343	Sat 05/23/15 05:55 PM
Don't write poems because you misunderstand. I like vanilla. It's what I find attractive and exciting. It's called a preference, not discrimination. Ok, moving on.