Topic: Please constructively criticize my profile
colinmingle's photo
Fri 05/08/15 08:15 PM
Hi,
I'm not having much luck here. Most likely it's the way I look but, that shouldn't matter should it? Anyhow I'm completely clueless. Help!

mikey5360's photo
Fri 05/08/15 08:27 PM
Well your profile consists of just the basics....
Tell a bit of your story...be a little bit humorous....
Make it heartfelt.....and not judgmental....
It needs a hook...something that will entice the reader to want to write to you...

moemoe1987's photo
Fri 05/08/15 08:28 PM
Well if a person is seriously interested, looks shouldn't matter. You are a little vague in some description on things about you, maybe be more specific on what those things are that you can do. Also, add what you are looking for in a woman,..just some ideas I guess

no photo
Fri 05/08/15 08:53 PM
I would not say you are unattractive. The photo itself could be a bit better. maybe in your profile you could say a little about what qualities you want in a woman. Maybe something about the type of relationship you'd like to have. Once again, I think a lot of women would like your photo.

colinmingle's photo
Sat 05/09/15 06:57 AM
Thank you all very much for the polite replies and will get right to work on expressing myself better. Initially I was concerned about putting too much out there. For example I really like puppies and meerkats but, I don't think I should include that in my profile. I don't want to come across as soft and squishy. Anyhow thanks guys, I have my work cut out for me.