I remember once I went to Brighton when I was a kid, I saw the beach for the first time and I fell in love right there and then I fell in love. I remember the sun was really bright and I had to put my hand up to shade my eyes but it didn't bother me. I was just amazed by the beauty of it the waves, the froth that went over my feet that was cold but yet it warmed my heart. I remember sitting down and just staring for what must of been a full thirty minutes, just staring at this beautiful wonderful thing I had never seen before. my sister found a large fish head on the beach and chased me, I remember struggling to get up and then running as fast as I could, not because I was scared but because it was fun. I didn't want to leave I wanted to sit by the sea forever just staring and being nowhere else doing nothing else. I remember once I went to the hospital when I was 20. I saw him for the first time and I fell in love right there and then I fell in love. I remember the sun was really bright through the window and there was a shade to block it out but it didn't bother me. I was just amazed by the beauty of him, the eyes, the hair, the cry that was loud but it warmed my heart. I remember sitting down and staring for what must of been a full thirty minutes, just staring at this beautiful, wonderful baby I had never seen before. my sister had bought a plush toy she had found in a little shop and hugged me with it in her hand. I remember struggling to get up not because I was in pain but because I was holding my baby. placing him with my sister while I freshened up, I didn't want to leave him I wanted to be with him forever just staring and being nowhere else and doing nothing else.

it may not interest you but some people I know have gone to school to learn to writye the way you do... I believe the term is stream of conscious writing. many people try and just don't get it.. so it stands to reason many people will not be able to "get" your writing... oh well it is supposed to be good for you first and everbody else next.

is good story in Aesop's fables " the man the boy and the donkey,,, about the dangers of listening to other people lol like me.

don't keep trying just keep doing. no such thing as doing creative writing wrong..

thank you for that, I will definitely read Aesop's fables. I've listened to other people for way to long so maybe reading these might give me some pointers lol.

Beautiful!