Tell me everything you can...
can you tell me?
Who would want to hurt this man ?
Tell me how this man can die...
tell me...
Did he ever really have a life ?
So wont you please tell me...

Do your nightmares came for real
tell me
Mother earth you’ll spinning wheels
tell me
Climb to the highest mountain top, don’t push me...
I’ll come down when I jump off !
Tell me

Raped when she was seventeen
Nothing herd and nothing seen..poor baby...
Faces they come back to haunt her
can you tell me...
She prayed to god to take her now
So won’t you please tell me...

Do your nightmares come for real
tell me
Mother earth you’ll spinning wheels
tell me
Climb to the highest mountain top, don’t push me
I’ll come down when I jump off !

Tell me
Ware waer you on the night of ?
can you tell me
Tell me everything you saw and herd
Bring the chork to draw the outline
Am I ever running out of time
Tell me everything you can
Is there any hope for a common man ?
I have just one question for you...
Can I live my life in peace...
So won’t you please tell me...

Do your nightmares come for real...
Tell me...
Mother earth you’re spinning wheels
tell me
Climb to the highest mountain top, don’t push me
I’ll come down when I jump off !

THIS 'POEM' WAS PROBABLY ONCE VERY NICE BUT I FEEL IT HAS BEEN 'CHOPPED'
TREMENDOUSLY AND THE SPELLING IS ATROCIOUS!!! ONCE YOU GET PAST ALL THAT
(IF THAT IS POSSIBLE) THERE IS A VERY SAD BUT 'DARK' SIDE OF THIS
WRITING. I CAN RELATE TO BEING RAPED AS I WAS ALSO RAPED WHEN SOMEONE
BROKE INTO MY HOME WITH MY FIVE YEAR OLD AND MYSELF AND RAPED ME AFTER
THREATENING HER LIFE IF I DID NOT COOPERATE. LIFE GOES ON AND YOU HAVE
TO BE STRONG TO LIVE IN THIS WORLD AS IT IS TODAY. HOPE YOU DON'T MIND
MY HONESTY. IF YOU INFACT WROTE THIS YOUSELF, WITH SOME SPELLING
LESSONS AND WRITING YOU COULD CREATE SOME BEAUTIFUL WORK. I HAVE BEEN
PUBLISHED IN POETRY ELEVEN TIMES.

thanks for the input, I know spelling is not one of my strong
points...thank god for spell check but as you can see if the don't work
sometimes.
sorry to hear about your mishap, the words are just a song that I wrote
and recorded. Some times I'll see something like in a movie and I'll
make it a topic of a song.

WELL IN THAT CASE I'M IMPRESSED IN SPITE OF YOUR SPELLING, LOL DID YOU
SAY THIS WAS A SONG ALREADY FINISHED AND PLAYED? I COULD HELP YOU PUT
IT ALL TOGETHER BETTER IF YOU NEED THE HELP. I USED TO HELP MY LITTLE
BROTHER WITH WRITING SONGS FOR HIS BAND. I LIVED IN INDY AND HE LIVED
IN WYOMING. WE DID IT ON THE PHONE OR BY MAIL

-yea it.s beyon done...like 5yrs. now, the music stayed the same but
it's the second writing . you can read the first writing in my talk
about the dark side post.

oops sorry this is the first writing the secon writing is on the what
are you going to do posr...it's late and the mind is going. been up
since 3 am

Hey I am with the mind being tired!! I sent you a firnds request if u r
interested. That way I can find u and talk more another time. I think
u r very interesting and also cute. I think I am going to bed. Oh, I
forgot I have NO BED!!!! I just moved here from Florida, sold my house,
am staying with my daughters family waiting for my new apartment to be
finished. The construction is almost complete and hopefully I will be
able to move in soon!!! I am missing having a real bed and my own
SPACE!! lol

Talk about spelling!!! Look how I spelled FRIENDS, lmaorotf! I sent u
a friends request, sorry, quess I should't critique your spelling
anymore huh?