Tell me where to go, tell me what to do, I'll be right there for you, tell me what to say, no matter if its true, I'll say it all for you...

I used to be the type of kid that would always think the sky is fallen, why am I so differently wired, am I a Martian? What kind of twisted experiment am I involved in? Cause I feel like I don't belong in this world that's why I'm scolfin at authority defiant often, flyin off the handle at my girlfriend, so I am non compliant in this world, I'm just shy and awkward. And I don't need no psychologist tryin to diagnose why I have these underlyin problems. Thinkin he can try and solve em, Im outside chalkin up drawings on the sidewalk and in the front drive talkin to myself or either that inside hiding off in a corner somewhere quiet, tryin not to be noticed cause I am cryin and sobbin, I had a bad day at life so I aint talkin.

I used to be the type of kid that would always think the sky is fallin, why am I so differently wired in my noggin? Cause sporadic as my thoughts come its mind boggling. Cause I obsess on everything in my mind, small crap bothers me but not my ex. she said sayonara, then split but I don't give a Spit, I'm fine as long as there are batteries in my Walkman. But if this is all there is for me life offers, why bother even tryin to put up a fight its nonsense. But I think a lightbulb just lit up in my conscience. What about the rhymes I have been jottin, they are kinda giving me confidence. Instead of trying to escape in my comics, why don't I just blast a little something like onyx to put me in the mood to wanna fight and write poems that say what I want to say to that girl that said I failed her. Grab ahold of my balls like that's right the fights on trick. Who would have knew from the moment I turned on the net , that I could be iconic in my conquest.

I use to be the type of kid that would always think the sky is fallin, Now I think the fact that I am differently wired is awesome. Cause if I wasn't I wouldn't be able to work words like this and connect lines like crosswords and use my enemies words words as strength, to try and draw from and get inspired off em. Cause all my life I was told and taught I am not spit, By you wack freakin giant piles of dog spit. Now you shut up Biotch I am talkin, thought I was full of horse spit, and now you freakin worship the ground on which I am walkin. Suck a duck, the day you beat me pigs will fly out my arse in a flyin saucer full of Italian sausage. The most high exalting and I aint halting till I die from exhaustion inhale my exhaust fumes. The best part about me is that I'm not you, I'm me and I'm the Fire Marshall.

And this is my legacy.......M

Sounds familiar!

Wow!

I love how you are "able to work words like this and connect lines like crosswords"...that's pure talent!

Don't ever stop writing!

It's always a good habbit to point out the quotes when you write, instead of saying nothing, people might think you wrote this. When in fact these are the lyrics to an eminem song. I love the song though.

I did mention at the bottom of my post.

This is my legacy.......M

At the end of his song he repeats those words 3 times. "This is my legacy" You made me believe it was part of the song. Not to mention all you said was the letter M. Not even a word,just a letter. A very bleak description in my opinion but what do I know? I Do know that you failed to use quotations. Not 1 single quotation was used but I'm not pointing fingers. :-)

Differently awesome write!....

Awesomely different too!

Also violates site rules if I'm not mistaken,I believed it has to be your own material.

Ought to be good as it was written by the master himself

In the world of music and poetry I assumed those would know whom I was referring to. My apologies for not saying his full name. Where I am from though we just say M. I shall try to lower my assumptions on here.

Thank you!

No worries, most knew it was Eminem and those who didn't, didn't give a chit..