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I wonder where you are today
whether close to me or far away perhaps living in the very next street so there is always just a chance to meet but would you just not know my name seeing as I do not look the same as when we walked so many miles when the world was full of smiles |
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Good one.....very nice! |
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Good one.....very nice! Thanks so much, now you must write something too :) |
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Thanks , you are so kind, I hope you going to write something on here too
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The last time I saw Colette
Such an unforgettable day a sunny day with clouds from time to time you come to me in the street and knock me out of rhyme in two years why did we not meet? I should notice more but I'm busy doing mime for the first time in my life having nothing to say telling you a million words of lies on starry nights alone along the way I need to say so much I need so much to touch a simple holding of your hand will help to make you understand will tell you that I will not forget if I live a hundred years your face will haunt me still and yet i am tough too tough to care you're just a girl with dreams of endless love as if such things came down from up above yet was it not I who gave you such ideas while lying under stars above before i drifted off to look for someone new and found too late that there was none like you today I could not speak so I told you not a single lie and I never saw you cry and we never said goodbye you will not know that you were never just my friend and that love does not come to an end |
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Good one.....very nice! Thanks so much, now you must write something too :) Oh dear.....now I will never give a complement again! I am not good at poems or poetry...can I quote? |
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Good one.....very nice! Thanks so much, now you must write something too :) Oh dear.....now I will never give a complement again! I am not good at poems or poetry...can I quote? Thanks for your kind compliment, please quote if you wish :) |
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Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt!
And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB! |
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Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt! And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB! Wow, it's a great first attempt! and so you now must on to write many many more, as you say, inspiration is the key, and you have that, so keep on writing! james |
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Thanks, Walker...that was my very first attempt! And my mom will always be in my thoughts, though I don't get to see her as often as I like, being in another state. I was inspired to write something as I thought of her today after seeing my sis post her pic on FB! Wow, it's a great first attempt! and so you now must on to write many many more, as you say, inspiration is the key, and you have that, so keep on writing! james Thanks...I will try though but compared yours and Angels...it is nothing! And Rainbowslider's rhymes so well......! |
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Thanks...I will try though but compared yours and Angels...it is nothing! And Rainbowslider's rhymes so well......! Had to rephrase it... Compared to yours and Angel's....mine is nothing!!! |
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