Topic: I wrote this for a girl i know
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Sat 09/29/07 05:35 AM
Your Will, Strong as a king!
Towards your people, life you bring.
Greatful are they to you, hum and sing.
A Leader, Realizeing this you may not, Many
look to you for guideance and hope. Your fearless
attatuide towards life brings this trait out in you.


Your Spirit, As hard as the shield you carry!
Pitty, For the fallen in your path more often than not may vary.
Your guard tested by many, Broken but, by only a few, Fearless and Bold in your ways, you hold your stance. Not so much as even a sudden glance.


Your Love, As mighty as the sword you tote!
Fierce and Sharp . Careless be not, it could be your throat.
Feelings often hidden, emotions buried deep. Why these things from me you keep. Like the sword you yield, your edge never dulls, gives way, bend, or shift.


Your Presence, Relished by many, Sought after but by few!
While the times I spent here, True I am too you, were the best lifes ever sent to me. Ups -N- Downs our friendship has endured,
This we know is sure. Regret I've never had. Only one wish, That you may never be sad.


Your Endurance, Trained by life, Wanting are many!
More can she bare than many of you dare. You gain
by this more as there will be loss by this gain.

peachiegirl28's photo
Sat 09/29/07 05:38 AM
flowerforyou nice

Britty's photo
Sat 09/29/07 05:39 AM
what a beautiful verse, straight from the heart.

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/29/07 06:44 AM
Wow....great read, thanks for sharing:smile:

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Sat 09/29/07 06:48 AM
Kickin words..thanks for sharin em

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Sat 09/29/07 07:27 AM
Wow nice...

flowerforyou