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Looking in the mirror what do I see
A 46 year old woman starring back at me. What is she saying eyes wide and blue She is saying come on girl motivation is needed by you. All the happy moments that she once enjoyed so much Left without a goodbye just abandon in a rush. But a glimpse of hope and a ray of light Has opened that door to a new in sight. So now as I look I can smile I can laugh The creative passion deep from that hidden doorway has jumped out at last. So no more hiding and write as u once did As this 46 year old woman smiles happily like a giggly kid Excitement and passion is flowing through her veins No more mountains to climb no more stumbling blocks The leash of life has returned and is not being left to rot So now looking in mirror what is it she will see a light so bright from those big blue eyes She standing tall contented in her way Welcome back lady now let's get creativeness flowing each and every day. |
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Hello
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That's a spirit! Keep going angel!
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Hello to lovingbj and thank u for dropping by. Yes thank u to NoMindGamesPlease appreciated
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Thank u tazzops
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Enjoyed your rhymes :)
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Thank u all heartfelt
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Thank you
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Sun 10/05/14 05:14 AM
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Now, angel68111. that's a pretty poem. Well written. Full of energy.
Nice piece, pal. Now, if ye can only drop all those negatives ye might be appreciate more in here. tommy boy moran / Ireland. |
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That's a beautiful poem, Angel. If only you channelled your energies into writing, whether it be poetry or prose, instead of harping on the past however painful it may be. Let the past be the past, and hopefully you'll step into a more rewarding tomorrow.
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Thank you for saying such lovely things yes u are right it isn't worth me being hurt for thank u I have wrote for many years then I stopped as my mum got so ill but I have started again and it's my passion
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