The smoke from this weed influences my mind to explore a once empty pit,
Again the sensation of Eros arrow gave me a piercing hit,
Now my mind ponders if you are the woman I'm suppose to be with?
If only instructions came with this heart flattering kit,
Yet you seem to be the first aid for a man who's emotionally unfit.
It was your eyes that caught mine,
For only a second of a minute that seemed like a lifetime,
Now I'm here writing to you these lines,
The memory of you inspires me to all these rhymes,
Just to let you know these words are always the starting signs,
Of a union nothing short of being divine,
You and I with our hearts entwined,
Not saying all at all times is going to be fine,
But with all we have, minds combined,
There's nothing we'll be denied.
The smoke is out, yet the thoughts are still about,
Taking this step without a hint of doubt,
Starting with words, though not spoken directly from my mouth.

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Did you write that?

Hello and thank you
Yes I did, you like?

nice poem

Thanks ty

You're welcome.

Yes, I like it. It's very good.

Just posted another plz check it out and tell me what you think