Topic: my first post in a forum. yay!
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Thu 09/27/07 12:32 AM
ok, so i thought I might just start with a poem. why not? Ive got tons but this one is my first in a set of many.
it doesn't have a title, because If I gave it one it would give it away.


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Soothing sounds echo
A tune is displayed.
Where have all the missing children gone?
Hide in the comfort of something real
Hoping that this pain
They can no longer feel

Yet it turns and twists them
Something evil
You can not help but watch
They are the slaves of their ignorance

Stuck in a small vessel
Hardly able to breathe
The music continues to play.

The song delays,
Sadistic sorrowful whispers for their mommies and daddies
Chunky choking chains
Let them move only

Back and forth.
One way track.
They are forever imprisoned as dolls.

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please post your thoughts.

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Thu 09/27/07 12:35 AM

Welcome! drinker

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Thu 09/27/07 03:15 AM
"i like that" flowerforyou
welcome to jsh

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Thu 09/27/07 06:40 AM
Hope to see a whole lot more...
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Thu 09/27/07 08:40 AM
thanks!

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Thu 09/27/07 08:43 AM
Very Good....Welcomeflowerforyou

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Thu 09/27/07 08:46 AM
Excellent! Welcome to JSHflowerforyou