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Topic: ~ you
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 07/02/14 06:10 AM
you came to me under the blindfold of night your touch was heaven you left at dawn I awoke with radiance upon my skin the glow was real but were you?

Astrid Joined Tue 03/25/14 Posts: 7748	Wed 07/02/14 06:14 AM Edited by Astrid on Wed 07/02/14 06:14 AM
...yeah, where did he go?

sybariticguy Joined Thu 09/27/12 Posts: 1639	Wed 07/02/14 06:45 AM
you came to me under the blindfold of night your touch was heaven you left at dawn I awoke with radiance upon my skin the glow was real but were you? illusions of love are compelling too

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 07/02/14 09:50 AM Edited by Up2Us on Wed 07/02/14 10:01 AM
Nice write.... How anyone could walk away from you is beyond me..... .

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 07/02/14 09:57 AM
you came to me under the blindfold of night your touch was heaven you left at dawn I awoke with radiance upon my skin the glow was real but were you? Hugging your soul.

Unknow Joined Sun 03/23/14 Posts: 22	Wed 07/02/14 04:25 PM
Another beautiful piece of work that we can relate to....I think we all have had a loved one exit on us in life and left us wondering...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 07/02/14 05:19 PM
Astrid23..thankyou kindly for reading sybariticguy...illusions of love are compelling too...I agree... Up2Us...you!.. ..it was a dream.. tazzops....that is sweet.. thebucfan...lovely,thankyou.. it is always interesting to read how others relate to a written piece..an I thankyou so much for reading mine.

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