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there's a silent movie
playing inside my head a reel clicks,clicks images the next scene arrives sunlight a refilled jar of water sitting pure, expectant the water falls,falls,all over all over me and the words all belong to you |
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Sweet write....
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Your brevity bleeds emotion and narrative into your piece. This is great.
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Hey thank you for the pleasure of allowing us to read your magnificant piece:-D
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Up2Us...my thankyou in flowers....a perfect white daisy for you, thankyou
tazzops....a bright sunflower for you, thankyou plastic_pancakes...a complex orchid for you, thankyou for being here. thebucfan....a dahlia for you, thankyou |
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