Topic: ~ jeopardy
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Sat 06/21/14 07:27 AM
you say
i'm entitled, spoilt, unappreciative
you pass my sentence
with prejudice
before all the pages are turned
yet like a swimmer
in the deepest part
of the pool
i do primal,violent,thrashing things to survive
the breathing is hard
with this
silver spoon in my mouth

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Sun 06/22/14 01:30 PM
Nice write....flowerforyou

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Sun 06/22/14 02:32 PM
nice you...flowerforyou

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Sun 06/22/14 02:54 PM
Brought back to me the Greg Kihn song 'Jeopardy'...Nice ..flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 06/22/14 05:43 PM
Its always great to read your writeings and this is a real treat:-)

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Sun 06/22/14 07:32 PM
Ainjel...that's neat! ty flowerforyou

thebucfan...thankyou for finding it..flowerforyou

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Mon 06/23/14 06:10 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Mon 06/23/14 10:02 AM
tazzops...flowerforyou