Topic: My Piece of U
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Tue 10/24/06 08:48 PM
So...
here we are.
Its been so long coming, I hate to see you going
As long as you come back.

So I wont forget you,
give me a piece of you...
Well, I wont ever forget you
I just want a piece of you
Since I cant take a piece of you

This, for me?
Its beautiful. Thankyou, I love it
Yes I love you.
Because, I just do.

Yes, Ill be here when you come back
Please try to relax
Ill love you to the max
And Ill especially hold on to you
Now that I have a piece of you.

Goodbye.
Ok, see you later.
Kisses... Hugs n kisses... Hugs...
You take my love
And Ill take this little piece of you

I have you,
in my hand
so even when I cant
be with you... I have you
Call me when you land.

I walk away...
But I won't cry.
You know why?--
Cuz I have you, a lil piece of you
And I love you, no matter what
You are what gets me through but

Damn! I dropped it!

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 08:57 PM
Sorry...no dice...!

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Tue 10/24/06 09:33 PM
I wouldn't expect YOU to understand, sweetheart. Its on a much deeper
than your level of intelligence will let you venture to

lime_bender's photo
Tue 10/24/06 10:01 PM
i like the style, but it needs more body...the irony is good though...

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 10:04 PM
Okay monique...insults won,t help this poem...!

lime_bender's photo
Tue 10/24/06 10:07 PM
What i said wasn't an insualt, just an opinion.

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 10:12 PM
I was,nt talking to you dude...but thanks for the salute...!

michael1313's photo
Thu 10/26/06 06:59 AM
What Ever..."Monique",,,Babe,it was a sweet thoughful poem,
no matter what th other boys think,,,I liked it...M.