Topic: wrote a poem, and i wanna know what ppl think
stepnwolffan's photo
Mon 09/17/07 02:54 PM
here it is:

THE BATTLE of HEAVEN and HELL


Demons soaring, hell is roaring,

Satan's smile upon his face.

Heaven's tune, Angels looming,

Longing for God's light and grace.

Satan's laughing, while I am gasping,

For this last breath i take.

Angels crying as I lay dying,

Imploring them my soul to take.


Lucipher and his minions take my arm

To bring me to hell.

The smell of burning, rotten bodies

Filled my lungs. What a horrid smell.

Angels take my other arm to pull

Me towards the shining light.

But only for a moment, I felt

Joy-filled and bright.


Suddanly, a scorching fire

Burned the angels all to death.

I felt cold and dead inside, that horrid smell

I now taste in my breath.

The angels devine and God's bright light

Shone itself on Satan's face.

A painful screeching then emerged,

God burned the Devil witht his grace.


Demons and Angels battling hand to hand,

Fighting over the dying man.

Battling on forgotten lands of

Clear blue sky and deep, black sand.

The Devil hold me in his grasp,

And holds more tightly with my every gasp.

I struggled to fight with my every strength,

But to him, nothing was I against.


Angels singing, Hells bells ringing,

Deafening in every tone.

Angels falling, demons victory calling,

Heavens being overthrown.

Fire burning, lava scorching,

Darkness glooms across the sky.

Hell is calliing, heavens falling,

I know where Im going to die.


Though, one angel seems to exist.

She tried her best to reach me.. but she missed.

She then fell into hell's pit, I had to watch her burn.

Oh how horridly these tables seemed to have turned.

Scorching heat and rotten bodies

Filled the air in hell.

Now Im there for all eternity,

With no story to tell


stevil342001's photo
Mon 09/17/07 02:59 PM
very intense very good the imagary is there i can almost feel myself there very good work..!!

stepnwolffan's photo
Mon 09/17/07 03:00 PM
thaks much steve. have a nice day

CATBW56's photo
Mon 09/17/07 03:03 PM
very good, has the dark side effect, but liked it just the same.flowerforyou