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Topic: Finally
creationsfire Joined Wed 01/24/07 Posts: 4548	Mon 09/17/07 01:16 AM
Holding me closely As I wither and die Final release And able to cry Softly you kiss me Upon my lips Caress my soul In final bliss Where are you going? He asks with love I can not speak For I am lost As I close my eyes His locked on mine In my final bliss I can finally cry

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 09/17/07 04:13 AM


JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Mon 09/17/07 08:07 AM
absolutely beautiful

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 09/17/07 08:10 AM
I really luv that

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Mon 09/17/07 11:47 AM
Beautiful!!!

MIKE4001 Joined Tue 05/29/07 Posts: 2392	Mon 09/17/07 11:55 AM
Very Beautiful

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 09/17/07 11:58 AM
((((((( Karen )))))) Beautiful

creationsfire Joined Wed 01/24/07 Posts: 4548	Mon 09/17/07 08:01 PM
Thanks. Woke up in the middle or what felt like the middle of the night....that's what came out. Wish I could remember some of the ones that run through my head right before I go to sleep, but by the time I get to the puter, it's gone, sighhhhhhhh Thanks for the kudos

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