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The Internet can be a fun fun place
Instant messaging and chasing friends all day long All from the comfort of your bedroom Isn't that great!! Mum & Dad told you never to take sweets From hairy strangers but times have changed And everyday they have new high tec games If you are lonely don't look into shiny dark corners Cos little things will play on your mind Then slowly hook you in over time Is she a she or is he a he When you're on line how can you tell He maybe not your age, is she on the same page They seem to know your heart's desires Those web faced liars Before you know it they have you in their hands You tell them your life story and so they are understand Their stories are always so appealing But their details are not so revealing The only clue will be a spelling mistake When they mis translate Living in such a lonely society Where a friend is so rare Be careful on the internet Cos there are those who want to steal your confidence and respect All with the flick of a finger and the click of a mouse .... |
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The Internet can be a fun fun place Instant messaging and chasing friends all day long All from the comfort of your bedroom Isn't that great!! Mum & Dad told you never to take sweets From hairy strangers but times have changed And everyday they have new high tec games If you are lonely don't look into shiny dark corners Cos little things will play on your mind Then slowly hook you in over time Is she a she or is he a he When you're on line how can you tell He maybe not your age, is she on the same page They seem to know your heart's desires Those web faced liars Before you know it they have you in their hands You tell them your life story and so they are understand Their stories are always so appealing But their details are not so revealing The only clue will be a spelling mistake When they mis translate Living in such a lonely society Where a friend is so rare Be careful on the internet Cos there are those who want to steal your confidence and respect All with the flick of a finger and the click of a mouse .... Dope...I loved it...So True too!!!!!!  
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Mr. Charlie Checksum, Something about the poem, read it twice; actually 3 times. :) Here's why. 'Don't "look into shiny dark corners" coz little things will play on your mind' though first line 'dark corners' bit, didn't quite like it; then the next line "little things will play" made complete sense. that's how our mind works, I agree; & before we know it, it's 'bait, hook & sinker'. ".. slowly hook you over time", that was fairly 'civil'. I would have whiplashed with: 'drag one across the sands, 'sands of time' poetic license & all, you know. "..those web faced liars"; I intend using this phrase in office; even out of context; it's a great cuz word thanks "..the only clue.." initially puzzled me till I read the "mis-translate" bit a bit deep but it came together. Great Work, Man. Worthier in the re-reading. |
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Hi,
Thanks for your time and all the feedback. Have a good day!! |
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