I am a positive lad, normally, but there are times
when I like to lie, and gently lick my wounds,
and remember those that have injured me.

Soothingly I contemplate my revenge, "best served up
cold they say." Perhaps, but the thought of imminent
retribution is a great balm to me and they, knowing of
my impending revenge, gives me great comfort.

Not very enlightened thoughts I grant you, but the
veneer of civilisation is exceedingly thin, as I can
attest to, and I really do want to hurt them badly,

I know this would all sound better if I was telling you
that I had been the victim of such unenlightened
behavior, but no it is my turn to hurt, and the prospect
does excites me.

The thought does occur to me that I may have been the
object of revenge in the first place, but then who said
life was fair? not bloody me!

Sounds like me
I get hurt easily and I think of revenge... but I don't really act upon the thought... but somehow it makes me feel better.

I enjoyed reading your poem... life isn't fair, that's for sure.

You are a beautiful woman, there I've just said what I thought.
You can look to FlightPhonix and Plastic-Pancakes for teaching
me to write what I feel, the exact emotion in fact. Remembering
that I am English this is a major step forward.

I don't think I would really seek revenge but there times when I
would like to.
Oh and thank you for your encouragement
Bill

Ha!...A man with balls and a sense of humor!...I love this, may I keep it?....

You see what a couple of drinks can do for you
and of course some helpful critisism and examples. I think I'm progressing.

oh thanks so much, Bill

You are doing great...and as an English person, you are doing spectacular. Keep up the good work.

Take care
Rosie