Topic: I WAS HERE TO WRITE A POEM
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Wed 02/05/14 04:55 AM
Edited by seeking_serendipity on Wed 02/05/14 04:56 AM
I WAS HERE TO WRITE A POEM

i was here to write a poem,
mind you, just a poem not a song..
haven't seen her for a while now,
no wonder the words are all wrong..

why did you decide to swim so far,
into that damn life lake,
i am left on shore, you are no more,
the world's a one big ache

half my age is gone,all in search.
but the longing seems to have no end ,
wonder when will it be, that we make it to church,
whats this mystery, i just cant comprehend

i hope you remember where's the place i live in,
its the house with sun strokes and dusty hot sky,
the lake is too big to find you,
hope you are back soon, before the shore turns dry..


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Wed 02/05/14 06:21 AM
Prettiness!!...."it's the house with the sun strokes and dusty hot sky":heart: smitten flowerforyou

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Wed 02/05/14 07:53 AM
have you seen the movie called "there is something about sally"? you really remind of the movie everytime i see your face.. hope it isnt strage.. anyways, you sure do make me regret the fact that i ain't old .. lol.. tks for the encouragement .. chao

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Wed 02/05/14 08:38 AM

have you seen the movie called "there is something about sally"? you really remind of the movie everytime i see your face.. hope it isnt strage.. anyways, you sure do make me regret the fact that i ain't old .. lol.. tks for the encouragement .. chao



Yes, I have seen that movie a couple of times :)

TY!happy ....Feeling is mutual:wink: ... And you're welcome!flowerforyou




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Thu 02/06/14 08:39 PM
I hope she comes back!

I enjoyed reading your poem about love lost. :smile:

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Sat 02/08/14 12:15 AM
lol.. i wish so too, only except that there is no one to come back(at least in literal sense).. the poem is merely a figment of imagination.. cant say the logic behind the prologed bachelorhood of mine, but then, either i am too good to find a match or else too bad to ever find the penultimate company.. truth, only god knows.. b.t.w thanks for wishing nevertheless..

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Sun 02/09/14 12:11 AM

lol.. i wish so too, only except that there is no one to come back(at least in literal sense).. the poem is merely a figment of imagination.. cant say the logic behind the prologed bachelorhood of mine, but then, either i am too good to find a match or else too bad to ever find the penultimate company.. truth, only god knows.. b.t.w thanks for wishing nevertheless..



Oh you're very welcome. :smile:
When we write poetry, we open our heart and soul. So thanks for sharing .
As your being single... my goodness, you are only 29, you have all the time in the world. May I suggest to brighten up your photos... they are too dark and lose the sunglasses. Just sayin' :smile: happy :wink: