Topic: A Love Poem
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Fri 01/31/14 07:42 AM
I have been happy meeting you
Time and again in the lee of love
Amidst the crowded trees, deep green in spread
I am happy that this is the last time
I watch our faces, each to each
In the pellucid pool, gently shivering blue…

The lips knew more than they would ever
Quaver the sweet, sweet air with fragrance
Smelt each morning when we woke
The early nip freshening our breath
Deep within, putting a sparkle into whatever
We saw and softly heard as perpetual whispers…
I have been happy meeting you

There is a lot to do, or there is nothing
To do now, the bodies themselves tremble anew
Shaking off the delicate dew from the grass
The first red and then yellow sun turning
And turning in his orb with his soft light
Shimmering the thrill of turning the door knob
I have been happy meeting you, my love.

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Sat 02/01/14 11:52 AM
Really nice. I remember in my youth, tho time dims my memory.
The sharpness , no grey anywwhere

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Sun 02/02/14 06:45 AM
Thank you rapsscallion. I'm happy you re-lived your joyous past.