Topic: Pain in Goodbye
cha7385's photo
Sun 12/15/13 07:13 AM
Pain of Goodbye
BY: CHBL 6/5/2010

SIX YEARs of being together is now over
I don't think I can hold the pain any longer
Confusion is still running through my mind
But I hope destiny is kind
Of giving me the peace I want in mind

Still can't accept reality
That I'm no longer your property
Because deep inside I'm still hurting
Feeling lonely that we're already parting

When you finally said your goodbye
I felt like I'm gonna die
But instead I choose to be strong
For I don't want to be be miserable for long

Letting go would not be easy
If I kept thinking that I'm not ready
To live life without your presence
And continue my future in your absence

The moment I discovered the fact
Confusion and anger dominates my act
Suddenly questions overflow
How come you didn't tell me anything as you go?

But nevertheless I'm not sure
If all of this are pure
Till I confirm it from you
That all of this is true

Somehow I realize
It's too late for us to compromise
Although sometimes it's painful
But at some point I'm grateful

Still waiting for your response
And I need an answer for once
For this will help me move on
Continue life alone
And someday live a contented life
With someone who deserves to call me his wife...

dcastelmissy's photo
Sun 12/15/13 07:36 AM
flowerforyou :cry: brokenheart flowerforyou

 Maria195's photo
Sun 12/15/13 08:41 AM

Sounds so sad frown flowerforyou

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Sun 12/15/13 09:25 AM
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Sun 12/15/13 10:01 AM

Pain of Goodbye
BY: CHBL 6/5/2010

SIX YEARs of being together is now over
I don't think I can hold the pain any longer
Confusion is still running through my mind
But I hope destiny is kind
Of giving me the peace I want in mind

Still can't accept reality
That I'm no longer your property
Because deep inside I'm still hurting
Feeling lonely that we're already parting

When you finally said your goodbye
I felt like I'm gonna die
But instead I choose to be strong
For I don't want to be be miserable for long

Letting go would not be easy
If I kept thinking that I'm not ready
To live life without your presence
And continue my future in your absence

The moment I discovered the fact
Confusion and anger dominates my act
Suddenly questions overflow
How come you didn't tell me anything as you go?

But nevertheless I'm not sure
If all of this are pure
Till I confirm it from you
That all of this is true


Still waiting for your response
And I need an answer for once
For this will help me move on
Continue life alone
And someday live a contented life
With someone who deserves to call me his wife...


Love this stanza as it says so much about you, about your strength...:heart: ...Good, good write!flowerforyou ...

Somehow I realize
It's too late for us to compromise
Although sometimes it's painful
But at some point I'm grateful





cha7385's photo
Sun 12/15/13 10:27 PM
Goodbyes are always.painful but its up to the person if they would linger to the pain for a long time or just choose to.move on time after time. One way to vent out the pain is to express it through poetry atleast it'll lessen burden felt and as.time goes.when.you.lookback it'll just put a smile.on your face.

peternellex's photo
Mon 12/16/13 03:03 AM
like your poem keep it my dear