Your sexy
Is what I need to breathe
You've caught me
Smoldering
In your energy
I see the way you look at me
Discretely
Your heart is mine
In this captivity
And you feed my freak

If only
I could pull you close
Just you and I
And heaven knows
How deep and fast
Our love would grow
My feelings for you
Are more than show
And you'd never want to let me go

How sweet and tender
Our teasing would be
With hands and fingers
Pleasingly
We'd devour with our mouths
This lustful need
Savoring the love
We'd create with ease
Our bodies and minds
Seeking each
Jealousy

Your sexy
Is what I need to breathe
You've caught me
Smoldering
In your energy
I see the way you look at me
Discretely
Your heart is mine
In this captivity
And you feed my freak

Copyright � 2013
Karen Elizia

Beautiful

KiK...

BettyB, it's so nice to see you again, I'm glad you enjoyed my fantasy as much as I do...

I always do. You are brilliant
Where have you been?

Thank you, you're too kind. I had to take time off to figure things out. Then spent too much time alone, and I missed the joy of creative writing. So I thought I'd return to the ole stompin grounds to see if it would come back to me, and so there you have it.

I'm glad you still enjoy my effort at self expression. It does make my heart feel better.

Hey thats pretty good .
You must been writting for awhile .
Kinda reads like a song to me I like it .
Good job

Hi Rock, nice to make your acquaintance, welcome to Mingle. Yes, I started delving into the art of creative writing back in 2003, when MSN still had writers groups, and I hosted my own for a year +.

I really enjoyed getting to meet and interact with so many different types of creative talent from around the globe that I caught the fever, and it's hard to shake.

Real life got in the way for a few years and I had to give it up until I divorced my husband of 18 years, a year and a half ago. MSN no longer offered the same amenities, so when I came back online single this time I joined dating sites that eventually led me here to Mingle.

The forums are a great place and way to meet and interact, and the real people here are pretty cool and fun to hang out with. So stick around and join in, you never know, you might find that someone special if that's what you're looking for.

Glad you like my verse. Now it's your turn to show us yours.

Hey thats pretty good .
You must been writting for awhile .
Kinda reads like a song to me I like it .
Good job

Well first I like to say hello!
An then say sorry to hear bout your marriage .That is a ***** to go
throuh I no this first hand I was with my kds mom for 17 /18 yrs! AN ITS NOW BEEN A BIT QUITE A BIT THINGS HAVE BECOME NOT SOJADED FOR ME .SHE REMARIED LIKE S WEEK LATER .! LOL NO BUT IT SEEM LIKE TO ME. BUT UNLESS THERE IS A TERRABLE ITEM THAT CANT BE FORGIVEN IT WILL GET BWTTER AN BETTER AS TIME GOES BYE WELL WERE ALL DIFFERENT SO GUESS THATS NOT ALWAYS THE CASE FOR SUM! OK SO I HOPE IT GETS BETTER AN BETTER AS TIME GOES BYE THERE AN AS FAR AS THEASE SITES I ONLY BEEN ON FEW OF THEM REACENTLY I OPEANED ACTT ON MOST LIKE TOO YRS AGO AN NEVER CAME BACK TILL LUKE ONE IR TWO MONTHS AN I FINE THERE SO MUCH DARN WORK JUST SETING UP I GET FFRUSTRAED BEFORE I EVEN MET ANY INE IR THEY WANT MONEY MONEY. AN THAT JUST TORKS ME SO IM GIVING THIS ONE A SHOT AN THEY ASK FIR MONEY ALLREADY JUST TO HURRY MY PROFILE . I THINK ?I DONT NO .SO IM GLAD YOU WROTE BACK. HAVE GOOD MORINING.I HAVE TO GET SOME SLEEP.IM EXUSGASTED AN ITS MY PLESURE MAY BE ILL PUT SOME TYPE OF WRITTINGS UP IF I STICK AROUND. NICE TO READ YOUR WORDS AS I SAID VERY GOOD WORK .PEACE SINVERELY JIM

Sorry tried twi times to edit .im just to darn wore out . Goid night.sweet dreams.jim