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I m not getting enough response suggest something.........
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I am no expert but your profile looks fine and well spoken. Maybe the only change I would do is put a closeup photo as your main picture. Keep also in mind your interests (Keywords) are used for matching.
Give it time. Keep the faith and...SMILE :) |
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thankxxxx for d suggestions........
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Personally I like your profile..... If I had to guess your issue. It's your age. If I were 22... An 18 yr old wouldn't be my 1st choice. This,is strictly my opinion. Good luck honey!
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For an attractive young adult who clearly has so many positives it is sad that your photos and text are fighting you every inch of the way making a connect.
All things fixable. You are on the right track posting a number of photos but look at the expression on your face; when you are even close enough to easily see it? Come on does that reflect happy, humorous, fun to be around? You have to pick photos that do not look like mug shots and a engaging SMILE is critical. You are a nice tall guy, great hair (could use a little professional styling; think future professional for a great lead shot), and awesome eyes but not one shot that even suggests any of your best features. Not sure if the glasses in the one shot are lab glasses or your frames but this shot does not flatter your features so it better be telling a clear story. One feature that can be a plus or minus is your full mouth; lighting is critical as would be not having any shots where those lips are not looking kissable so use sunscreen faithfully. The one shot with your leg up has poor subliminal rather than capitalizing on your lean and long limbs that and action photo could sell so well especially in one professionally dressed suit. Well worth the investment for dating and career. Come on Dear your body language and posture in these photos are terrible. A lot of people are not fond of being photographed but do it often enough that you have lots more photos to pick from. You have a camera get busy and get better photos. After one engaging lead shot make your photos tell the story about you; your interests, your college, your faith, your sports interests, your travel and recreation interests, do you have a big family or small, do you dance???? As a college student you have the basic writing skills to organize an outline and rewrite this profile. To be believable as a serious college student/future professional not a goof off you need to make sure it is well written even if you have to get some help from a writing tutor. Make every word positive, be as concise as possible, and remember your audience. Suggesting you are insane is not good on a profile even joking. Generally speaking self describing personality comes out as blah...blah...blah. Describing how you are easygoing, friendly, ect. are better. Good Luck. Welcome to Mingle. If you jump into forums you can get more exposure once you rework this profile. Believe me good results will be well worth the effort. |
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