Topic: rate my profile :-)
Greg4u76's photo
Mon 11/25/13 04:43 PM
So , what do you think ?

Lost_in_reverie's photo
Tue 11/26/13 03:54 AM

So , what do you think ?


Hey, Greg. Just had a quick look at your profile. It's pretty basic but at least what's on there tells people a little about yourself.

The phrase I wasn't sure about was "I never had alot of Girlfriends throughout my life as alot of folks seem to think that about me." You may want to reword this, or leave it out entirely, as I'm not sure if you're saying other people think you've had lots of girlfriends... That then leads me to wonder why people would assume that - what about your character gives that impression. Which doesn't leave a favourable impression.

You have a nice collection of pictures.

Other points to improve on:

*Currently you have that the profession is 'N/A' - maybe explain that, or at least put the kind of work you normally do, or if you're taking a break for an interesting reason.

*Tell a little more about what a "simple life" means to you - what are your interests, what do you like to do/where do you like to go?

*Also, you say "I'm not shallow or selfish..
I try not to be .." - this sounds contradictory.

I hope this helps. Best of luck on Mingle!