Topic: is my profile ok? | |
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Any helpful advice would be much appreciated
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Your pictures are very nice, however, I would include a full body shot in addition. I believe your written profile starts off great with a catchy sentence and it will sound inviting to some women. I would add a little bit more information about what you consider a "wonderful" woman to be, qualities you may be looking for. As far as your expectations on where you will find this lady, I think it would be wise to adjust the distance range to at least 150 to 200 miles from your location. This will allow for more women to contact you should they be interested. Just a little more tweaking in these areas and I believe you will have a great profile. Good luck in your search!
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Your pictures are very nice, however, I would include a full body shot in addition. I believe your written profile starts off great with a catchy sentence and it will sound inviting to some women. I would add a little bit more information about what you consider a "wonderful" woman to be, qualities you may be looking for. As far as your expectations on where you will find this lady, I think it would be wise to adjust the distance range to at least 150 to 200 miles from your location. This will allow for more women to contact you should they be interested. Just a little more tweaking in these areas and I believe you will have a great profile. Good luck in your search! |
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This profile has a positive and upbeat vibe that should create a lot of interest for you. Good smile and engaging lighting in lead profile shot is excellent.
You are a nice looking guy that might do better with a little more "spiffing up" with a razor before you take additional pictures. Your lead shot subliminally suggests how you would show up for a date and I think you would probably shave or trim even if you are sporting a winter beard. Play with your photo edit program and zoom back about 5% so the entire part of your face is in the mini version of your shots; especially the lead shot since that is what generates the majority of your views. Additional pictures hopefully tell a story to back up your personality and interests. The back ground in the one snap is a little distracting but "practice makes perfect". Welcome to Mingle. Will look forward to your participation in forums you sound like a catch for some of out deserving younger gals. |
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Hi Jodago ...I'm feelin the vibe too!...You have one of those faces that just screams NICE GUY!!....To each his own, but I'm a sucker for the 5 o'clock shadow, it's hawt!...Welcome to Oz young man!
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Thanks for the advice ladies,
And well wishes I appreciate it very much. |
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