Topic: the prettiest girl in the world
eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:14 AM
The prettiest girl
Dont now she pretty
Thats one of her pretty ways
Just a glaze at your pretty eyes got me on a x high
When u leave i come down look a.crack addict
Crazy cuz she was crack addicted but some they,happen as a kid ,she held it in like in side joke ,take it all in (weed smoke),let it out u bond to choke
You tell me u want to
I was thinking u was fornting
,,,,your name goon but your pain live on threw this poem i feel your soul and how but i want that prettiest girl by my side
But that pretty girl died,
Suecide

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:21 AM
Dont mind my spell ,
Failed at school
But scholarships to the pin ,that,a jail cell

sybariticguy's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:32 AM
Edited by sybariticguy on Sun 11/10/13 09:32 AM

Dont mind my spell ,
Failed at school
But scholarships to the pin ,that,a jail cell
Never too late to read a dictionary....

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 02:54 PM
Never to late ,for me but for you its over
Poems is my life so im potery
My poems are raw miss spell and all
From my grates to my fails over the law when i fight whit my pen to the endi would blend my mind whit pen,t)he end

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 03:01 PM
Feel my rain
King of pain
Crown me
Outkast to they ground me
Around devils i found me
I was holding god hand

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Sun 11/10/13 03:02 PM

Never to late ,for me but for you its over
Poems is my life so im potery
My poems are raw miss spell and all
From my grates to my fails over the law when i fight whit my pen to the endi would blend my mind whit pen,t)he end


I dont see a lot of misspellings. I think do you mean fronting rather than forting? that looked more like a typo to me :)

is your poem a true story?

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 03:06 PM
Make my own wordz



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Sun 11/10/13 03:25 PM
flowers


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Sun 11/10/13 03:33 PM

Make my own wordz






how will we know what they mean?

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Sun 11/10/13 04:29 PM

The prettiest girl
Dont now she pretty
Thats one of her pretty ways
Just a glaze at your pretty eyes got me on a x high
When u leave i come down look a.crack addict
Crazy cuz she was crack addicted but some they,happen as a kid ,she held it in like in side joke ,take it all in (weed smoke),let it out u bond to choke
You tell me u want to
I was thinking u was fornting
,,,,your name goon but your pain live on threw this poem i feel your soul and how but i want that prettiest girl by my side
But that pretty girl died,
Suecide


Not gonna kiss azz but your words got class...flowers

I like your edgy style Eric, you should write lyrics for rap!bigsmile



eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 08:58 PM
Every poem i wrote on here i did it off a cheep lil phone cant see the letters good.and there fresh off the head not s.copy not off.something i did right fast ,what i felt at the moment fast on i wont for get it,,,so sorry i try to put more time for yall kools 2 allz yallz peeps ha ha thanks to every one add me.as a friend,if girl ,

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:06 PM
My.poems are,real ,can i hear a poem.from u
.i dont like my poem. It was bad , tryed next one.well be100% better,sorry ,but show me one u like so i.can 187 it

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:09 PM
Add me
.......

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:10 PM
Lol.i.was being a smart ***

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:12 PM
Threw your.
Sweet soul u would feel what i say
,,, feel it
Wate for it

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:20 PM
Thanks
Sweet
Sorry for the misspelling and the all around mess
.u make my.day i had ! :-) on my face
I write rap,i rap ,i dj.poems,and am a boxer and i.do.tattoos

larsson71's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:24 PM
The prettiest girl in the World? That's easy? My mum! Then it's Leigh! flowerforyou

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:27 PM
To kool

eric503's photo
Sun 11/10/13 09:33 PM
I dont.look.at the face or the,size or age
I look at the person in the shell which is your body
Your heart
Plez read my poems and tell me what u think ,, i write one just for u