I want you.

I want to know what your strengths are

but I want to be your one weakness.

I want to know what you let go of,

so I may hold tighter to you.

I want to learn what you hate,

in order to become the thing you love,

I want to know what you no longer need,

so that if possible, you could ever need me.

I want you.

But I will only be here

should you say you want me.

Beside you.

Or maybe leading you by the hand

to that gentle tranquil place

where we can lay on a

lush, grassy knoll in the shadow

of a blossoming tree,

and when the blossoms fall,

I can wrap my arms around you,

from behind as we recline,

bathed in sunlight,

the blossoms fall around us.

But sadly, this tranquil place

only exists in my head...

and for the time being...

....so do you.

And yet, I am not sad.

Only faithful.

Faithful that somewhere....you may yet be real.

You may yet want me,

and we may yet share in this fantasy,

find our harmony, our tranquil place,

and relish our undying love,

forever.

And I will forever want you.

If you will have me.

(if this made anyone cry tears of joy, then I've done my job. Thanks for reading. comments and feedback encouraged and appreciated!)

Absolutely love it JRonin! Love to see this gift in you!

thanks

Hello my friend ....Romantic imagery, emotional depth, eloquent expression... Of course it brought tears of joy...Thank you Ronin!

nice

you're welcome

thank you sweetest

I want u
I want u now as u are
Sad,happy and all
I would catch your fail
If you was a hitter and i played the field i would drop your ball for you to win
At the end of game you give me a kiss we both win ,,i love u girl

I want u
I want u now as u are
Sad,happy and all
I would catch your fail
If you was a hitter and i played the field i would drop your ball for you to win
At the end of game you give me a kiss we both win ,,i love u girl

well well, someone so young who understands a little bit about love it looks likes :)

certainly you are welcome. it was a pleasant verse. now you will find her

Young but i learn from my and other mistakes
I dont no a thing about being in love ,i never been

Yeah, maybe someday. I'm kinda taking a break from looking since she doesn't seem to exist yet. I just hope once she does make herself known, I'll take notice. I can be rather blind sometimes. It's a curse.

ur a true poet sir... a Picasso with the words (y)

it will sneak up and sit on your shoulder like a slow surprise :)

or else you just haven't meant her yet. you cannot see what is not there. you have the good fortune of not seeing love rsther than pretending it to appear.

Sneak attack

I'm of the belief that attraction is real, but love takes time to grow and cultivate. It's a lot more messy in real life than it is in the novels and movies we read and watch. It can both beautiful and brutal at times. I don't ignore the brutal, but I do like to focus on the beautiful things about it that make it worth having, that make a person worth holding onto. I'm sentimental that way.