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Topic: Alive
ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sat 10/21/06 08:08 AM
My heart beats A slow rythmic heat courses through my soul. Coming alive, slowly awakening Breathing my first breath Eyes opening slowly,unsure of what I see My hands move slowly I push the cobwebs from my eyes Lifting my head, shaking it Shaking loose the rubble in my mind I see clearly,breathe freely I am alive for the first time in my life Truly alive My heart beats A slow rythmic courses through my soul..........

Ontario Joined Tue 09/19/06 Posts: 4061	Sat 10/21/06 08:13 AM
What ?

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sat 10/21/06 08:23 AM
Ontario I would like to see you try to write something other than negative comments..go on try writing poetry for a change

Ontario Joined Tue 09/19/06 Posts: 4061	Sat 10/21/06 08:27 AM
I concede to my limitations luv, and not trying to be negative ...still love me?

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sat 10/21/06 08:28 AM
Love?? Never said I did..sorry I just don't give my love to just anyone...tolerate you...yes...

Ontario Joined Tue 09/19/06 Posts: 4061	Sat 10/21/06 08:31 AM
Okay...fair enough, keep writing and I will keep reading!

cowboy112259 Joined Mon 10/16/06 Posts: 93	Sat 10/21/06 09:10 AM
I think you do a very fine job...keep it up

will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Sat 10/21/06 09:11 AM
: ) WILL

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 10/21/06 10:10 AM
your poem brought a tear to my eyes,as I'm wishing I could wake that way too. but my demons of yester-year will not just go away,and continue to haunt my soul.Is part of the reason I am here,the other part is to find my # 1 in life and have fun growing old with her...

shadowdog Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 12773	Sat 10/21/06 12:53 PM
it's one of the decent poem i've read in a long time

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