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Topic: "What is Noted"
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sun 07/14/13 11:02 AM
"What is Noted" What is noted is quick It is strong and direct like Aged moonshine drunk visually Desire offered to numb your pain And touch on pleasure Where not touched in recent days I don't linger long About my wants and wishes Would rather be a shooting star A fire fly or fireworks in a Cloudless sky Can you see what I see? I don't need a lasting If now gives me feelings Everlasting Touching you where, then, You can touch me Together, everlasting

Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Sun 07/14/13 01:11 PM
The now is good.

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sun 07/14/13 01:15 PM
if you should remain in the now

falkon99 Joined Thu 06/27/13 Posts: 158	Sun 07/14/13 04:34 PM
Keep in writing cute .

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