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Topic: Gentle Horizon
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 07/13/13 01:56 PM
I've never been there but I feel like I have A comfortable season Seen in his eyes Whose slopes are like Sand and stone Many miles I have gone I've never been there but I know where I am The gateway to a paradise Made lush by him Open range horizon Gentle man take me Side by side, and inside me

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 07/13/13 02:00 PM
Great as usual.

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 07/13/13 02:02 PM


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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 30121	Sun 07/14/13 08:30 AM
Absolutely gorgeous in such a minimal package...Excellent work, golden.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sun 07/14/13 09:14 AM
I've never been there but I feel like I have A comfortable season Seen in his eyes Whose slopes are like Sand and stone Many miles I have gone I've never been there but I know where I am The gateway to a paradise Made lush by him Open range horizon Gentle man take me Side by side, and inside me Perfect..like him.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 07/14/13 09:17 AM
Crisp, golden! Crisp. Now this brief piece of yours is quick and deep like some new reference to freedom. " Gentle man take me . . . " Very moving. May i?? - tommy boy ===

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sun 07/14/13 10:45 AM
Absolutely gorgeous in such a minimal package...Excellent work, golden. thank you F & L, I like to keep things simple

surfratdeck Joined Sun 07/14/13 Posts: 74	Sun 07/14/13 11:46 AM
I've never been there but I feel like I have A comfortable season Seen in his eyes Whose slopes are like Sand and stone Many miles I have gone I've never been there but I know where I am The gateway to a paradise Made lush by him Open range horizon Gentle man take me Side by side, and inside me Enjoyed this thank you for sharing , it flows nicely and gave me the chance to walk inside your thoughts . Deck...

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sun 07/14/13 11:47 AM
I've never been there but I feel like I have A comfortable season Seen in his eyes Whose slopes are like Sand and stone Many miles I have gone I've never been there but I know where I am The gateway to a paradise Made lush by him Open range horizon Gentle man take me Side by side, and inside me careful where you tread! Enjoyed this thank you for sharing , it flows nicely and gave me the chance to walk inside your thoughts . Deck...

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Sun 07/14/13 12:03 PM
I like to keep things simple No worries...

Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Sun 07/14/13 01:10 PM

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