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Topic: What that Person Was
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Wed 06/26/13 05:50 PM
I look around at What that person was I can see the care used In things made and chosen I see his version of a home I live in what that person was I am not sure when the Continental shift caused Our lives to drift, Drift apart As untied boats from docks do The distance between the two Too far for recovery I look around and see What that person was And It is sad To lose a person tied to me And I am the person who shed The leash Never telling the person who was Good-bye

Momoiro_Usagi_7 Joined Sun 05/12/13 Posts: 1450	Wed 06/26/13 07:04 PM
Thank you...no really thank you!

Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Thu 06/27/13 04:35 AM
Very well put.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 06/27/13 05:43 AM


Third_and_Long Joined Fri 06/21/13 Posts: 49	Thu 06/27/13 02:11 PM
Both the words and the metaphor are very beautiful. I think tazzops is right on in his assessment: ~ Wes

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