My thoughts - were all too eager to criticize our own work. I feel my last poem was below my own potential
I think this ones better :)


What if..
Your dreams and thoughts became your reality
What kind of world would your mind put you in
If you haven't mastered your emotions would they decide the outcome of your manifestations
If you were angered and saddened by the loss of people close to you what situations would your mind put you into
If you were beaten beyond reason, bludgeoned and bloody, would the wrath of your rage envelop and burn everything around you
Consumed in fury what you see no longer making sense
Your own loss of control would tear and shred apart the world you've created
What if...
your emotions were no longer balanced, would you fall victim to it's devastation, forcing out what you feel
Feeling the weight of the world crashing down on you
If you were saddened and depressed, would you forever fall in a black hole never able to land
Drowning in pain and misery from within your own hell
Feeling agony and torment you cast yourself in a cocoon of nightmares you'd never wish upon any man
If you were just a little child...
All alone and scared in the world you knew would your mind chase you, forever hunted and haunted by your own fears
Running away for eternity, too young and naive to stop and fight because you lack the experiences and wisdom life teaches
And what if...
Your mind created a beautiful and ethereal world you could give a name to such as heaven
A heaven so exotic and phenomenal you couldn't hold back tears at such a sight, beholding to what your eyes see, no mortal words can describe such a wonder, you might say it was like eternal beauty gazing at you, and if I ever had the chance too see what you might have seen my heart couldn't bear-
beat another minute, for such a thrill the mere thought sends me a chill

Indeed What If?