reflections of you ripple on the waters edge as sunbeams glissen across soft waves made by the breeze on this april day i sit on the waters edge just admireing mother natures beauty the leaves changing colour tree branches bringing new life if only for a season the beauty is there to be seen by all birds gathering sticks and anything they can muster to make home for their young flowers basking in the morning sun as people sit on benches reading papers to see whats going on the waters edge is where i belong,

Once again I think you should write these snippets as a poem!

thank you hippie so should you some of your work is poetry to i jus like writing what comes to mind

Nice

thank you goldenhinde

I can tell you're a professional at this. Love the description :)

im not a profesional just use my eyes and remember things i see around me ive been on here now writing 4 months a lovely lady on here called leah kind of got me intrested on this and other people on here thats all truth

I agree with oldhippie 1952, in that you should lend poetic refrain to your work. Stretch, Break and Structure is the key here. Very nice work, Woznotwoz. Reads well!

tommy boy

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