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strange that we all know
that we walk this earth and wear shoes to cover the rocks and hot pavement beneath our feet as we walk all over to see the scene untill one has been touch in all our might for we tend to keep moving for we have no end to see what is ahead as we walk, talk and laugh we are crying silently inside to avoid the pain as were alone with no sorrows to wish one of us a goodnite as our minds, body and soul may at times be frozen but hold ones hand and u shall see tomorrow with no mercy at that look down at your feet a new pair of shoes have been granted with such glee now i know i can pass these old shoes down to the next person with crying pain deep down in there soul |
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nicewrite...and i like the title.
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Beautiful write that dives to the bottom and "touches" the heart of the reader..
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that is beautiful pulls at the heart strings that
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