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Topic: Whispers
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 04/21/13 01:26 PM
Whispers Wonderful whispers Of your touch Make my body Ache so much Be gentle Slice my heart With your lips Tear me apart My soul is heavy I must confess Soothe my spirit With your caress Whisper your love To me tonight Stay with me Till dawn’s light

1Cynderella Joined Mon 02/18/13 Posts: 2398	Sun 04/21/13 01:53 PM
Beautiful Hippy! Displaying candy to a starved populus again,I see.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 04/21/13 03:39 PM
Thank you Cynderella. But with candy I can draw them in for capture. Shhhhh!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 04/21/13 06:20 PM
Whispers Wonderful whispers Of your touch Make my body Ache so much Be gentle Slice my heart With your lips Tear me apart My soul is heavy I must confess Soothe my spirit With your caress Whisper your love To me tonight Stay with me Till dawn’s light I really like this one Hippy!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 04/21/13 06:28 PM


pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 04/21/13 06:58 PM
nice write. :)

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 04/21/13 06:58 PM
nice write. :)

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Sun 04/21/13 08:00 PM
Awe cool write Hippie. If that doesn't get you laid the women there have no heart lol. All kidding aside ir is really great.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 04/22/13 01:12 PM
Thank you everybody.

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Mon 04/22/13 01:16 PM
Write on hippie !

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Mon 04/22/13 01:42 PM
love that hippie

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 04/22/13 02:33 PM
..♥..

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 04/22/13 03:38 PM
Thanks everybody!

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