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cast down and out decrepid death to
rejoin the fallen and angry vengeful time, enemy for all time let find it's mark and enlighten the trapped that worship it's spell through clensing fires of intimate hell take my hand as child of earth let fear not be your equal mother nature is rebirth trust in life, ever new and renewing vivify as timeless never to look back again |
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cast down and out decrepid death to rejoin the fallen and angry vengeful time, enemy for all time let find it's mark and enlighten the trapped that worship it's spell through clensing fires of intimate hell take my hand as child of earth let fear not be your equal mother nature is rebirth trust in life, ever new and renewing vivify as timeless never to look back again I really like the negativity in the first stanza; it encapsulates powerfully dark emotion… 
Then in the second stanza; it feels lighter, more amenable. 
Good for you, Sinner, just letting it all go… 
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cast down and out decrepid death to rejoin the fallen and angry vengeful time, enemy for all time let find it's mark and enlighten the trapped that worship it's spell through clensing fires of intimate hell take my hand as child of earth let fear not be your equal mother nature is rebirth trust in life, ever new and renewing vivify as timeless never to look back again For me, your most powerful (and profound) write!...So much truth in these words, well done!
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Tue 03/19/13 10:25 AM
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I really like the negativity in the first stanza; it encapsulates powerfully dark emotion…
Then in the second stanza; it feels lighter, more amenable.
Good for you, Sinner, just letting it all go…
Yeah, I know you and your fascination with things wicked! 
It is indeed a message to myself. Thank You
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'like' Thank you teasing!
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For me, your most powerful (and profound) write!...So much truth in these words, well done!
This forum is a great place to experiment. I enjoyed writing this one. Knowing that it write came through more powerfully and profoundly is exciting! Thank You
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cast down and out decrepid death to rejoin the fallen and angry vengeful time, enemy for all time let find it's mark and enlighten the trapped that worship it's spell through clensing fires of intimate hell take my hand as child of earth let fear not be your equal mother nature is rebirth trust in life, ever new and renewing vivify as timeless never to look back again For me, your most powerful (and profound) write!...So much truth in these words, well done!
agreed... 
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